The Land of
Painted Caves by Jean M. Auel was a bit of a disappointment. One
reason is based solely on the book and storytelling. The other is
completely personal and probably has more to do with my own life than
the book itself.
My first experience
with Earth's Children was Valley of the Horses. I saw Clan of
the Cave Bear as a movie and thought it was interesting. I imagine
that if I'd read the book upon which the movie was based, I would
have preferred the book. Now, though, I might not.
The reason I felt
disappointed that pertains solely to the book itself is the
redundancies. I realize, upon reflection, that this is part of the
author's style. I'm not sure if it's purposeful or a result of the
author forgetting what she'd previously written and therefore
reminding herself about it as she's writing. That's what it seems
like is happening. Another point of disappointment is the
contradiction within the story. For instance, at one point The First
decides to wait for the group to finish touring through the difficult
part of a long cave, but as we read through the tour of that part,
The First is with them and thinks to herself that she has to do it
because it's probably the last time she'll be there. This was not
the only example of this kind of contradiction.
I felt impatient
with the extreme detail used to describe many aspects of the story.
In a few places the story seemed to become an herbalist's field guide
more than a story about Ayla and Jondolar. In a couple of other
places the effort to describe the caves seems like an effort to prove
how much research time Auel spent in familiarizing herself with art
from prehistoric times. As a result of these two, I did not enjoy
this book as much as I have the preceding books in the series.
However, that may be in large part because I have grown in knowledge
and experience so very much from the time I read Valley of Horses.
Given my own life
experiences, I can't help but wonder if Auel has ever lived a
homestead-type life with all the work entailed in starting from
scratch. I wonder because she writes about such with rather
rose-colored glasses and in such as way as to make such very
attractive. In some ways, I'm glad she did. If she hadn't done so
in Valley of the Horses, I may not have ever been willing to
move to Texas the way we did. It is because of my experience, though
that I know how very rose-colored Auel's glasses are.
Skimming or skipping
paragraphs in a novel is usually detrimental to one's understanding
of the action of the story. Have you ever done it? I rarely do, in
all honesty, however, I found myself doing it pretty regularly once I
made it to about page 350 in The Land of Painted Caves. I'm
relatively certain I didn't miss anything pertinent to the story
line. That, in itself, seems to me another confirmation that she
and/or her editor didn't perform as much cutting as they could and
probably should have.
Have you read The
Land of Painted Caves by Jean M. Auel? If you have, what did you
think of it?
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